Thursday, April 2, 2009

Hero Cinquains

Cinquains are another type of poetry we have been practicing in Room 10.  The first line is meant to be the title, which is a noun.  The second line should have two adjectives.  The third line has three -ing words, which are verbs.  The fourth line should be a four word sentence.  The fifth and final line should have another noun which is similar to the title.  Here are some cinquains we wrote about our heroes:

Mum
short, english
jumping, running, swimming
mum's a great swimmer
Annabel
By Celia.

Adrian
loving, smart
playing, walking, sleeping
he is very nice
Dad
By Robbie.

Mummy
nice, helpful
caring, loving, working
I love my mummy
Hill
By Olivia.

Dad
big, tall
fixing, building, buying
he can make computers
Martin
By Max.

Dad
nice, kind
caring, loving, helping
he is my hero
family
By Willie.

Brother
nice, kind
helping, running, loving
he is the best
Julius
By Sasha.

Kid pix hero pictures to come!
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8 comments:

  1. UnknownApril 6, 2009 at 11:35 AM

    We are really impressed with your blog Room 10.

    We hope you will read ours and we can put up cool things like yours too.

    Keep it up,

    Room 8

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  2. AnonymousApril 6, 2009 at 3:28 PM

    hey great poems and i think dads can be great heroes! otalani

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  3. loimataApril 10, 2009 at 12:55 PM

    hi room 10,
    your blog is radical.
    cool poems about your heroes.

    Loimata-(rm.16)

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  4. Amy HossackApril 15, 2009 at 1:41 PM

    Hello,
    My name is Amy. I am a teacher from Shanghai, China. I used to live in NZ - I taught in a school on the North Shore of Auckland called Birkenhead School. I miss NZ very much.
    I liked reading your poems - they are terrific!
    Keep up the super work!
    Regards,
    Amy Hossack

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  5. Room 14 Seekers of KnowledgeApril 27, 2009 at 8:32 AM

    I really like your poems about your heroes . anyone can be your heroe and for any reason!
    morgan

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  6. Room 14 Seekers of KnowledgeApril 27, 2009 at 8:57 AM

    Hi this is Louis ,Cullen ,Julius from room 16. We really like the traffic feed that shows all the people that are reading your work, keep up the good work. ps we really like the poem about Julius because it sounds a lot like Julius! from boys in room 16

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  7. AnonymousApril 28, 2009 at 4:58 PM

    HI room 10 !!!!its me anton.
    cool blog. i love all the poems thay look awesome is your topic antartica
    ROOM 1o ROOKS
    FOOM ANTON
    robbie you rook

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  8. AnonymousMay 5, 2009 at 10:19 AM

    Dear room 10,

    I love your cinquains, they are very detailed, YOU ROCK!!!!!!
    I think my family are heroes too.
    Can't wait untill the next poem on your blog!

    From Lucy in room 16:)

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