Long, long ago there was a war
and you’ll never believe what people saw.
A thousand ships were sent,
hundreds of peoples souls were lent.
The Greeks built a wooden horse,
the Trojans took it in of course.
Greek soldiers came out of the horse at night,
all around there was fire and fright.
The Greeks won and they left the place
and the Trojans left, without a trace.
By Maia.
Troy
blood thirsty, scary
fighting, killing, trying
it was really horrible
War
By Stella
Wooden horse
Open war
Optional
Disaster caused by the gods
Ended with many deaths
Not fair
Horse was a trick
Of the Greeks to get inside Troy
Really strong armies
Ships sailed from Greece
Enough ships to conquer Troy
By Jordan
Troy
Swords, shields
fighting, chopping, battling
Many people died there
City of flame
By Briar
Hi Room 10
ReplyDeleteI think your poems about Troy are excellent. Congratulations!
I particularly like the way Maia organised rhythm & rhyme in her poem. Well done.
Hi Room 10
ReplyDeleteWe really enjoyed reading your poetry, we have been writing poetry too. We are writing poetry about New Zealand. It was great to see that you have used describing words, we are trying to do that too.
Keep up the wonderful work Room 10, we will come back and visit your blog soon to look at your fantastic work
Love from Room 14